Saturday, June 14, 2008

Picture discussion




The picture depicts the scene of a collapse house and an indian man covering his mouth. He must be shocked to see that his house has collapsed.The indian man is in agony. The house which had collapsed is very likely to belong to that indian man. Looking at the indian man's hands, it is stained with cement. He must have went to pick up the things that had collapsed onto the ground, while thinking of his collapse house. The indian man must be feeling very sad as he had lost his house, his source of shelter.

The house is mostly made of stones, rocks,wood and metal pieces. From this, i can infer that the indian man must be very poor as he could only afford a house made of simple materials. Looking at the apperarance and the clothes the indian man is wearing, i can also infer that he is poor. As the indian man is poor, i supposed that he build the house himself. It must have took him a lot of effort and hard work. The indian must be feeling heartache for his hard work. He might feel at a loss of what to do as this incident might have occured too sudden.

I think that a natural disaster such as earthquake have caused the collapse of the house. This incident is very likely to happen in india where earthquake is very frequent. I think that th indian man's friends and family will come forward to console and encourage him. Afterwards, the indian man will be building his new house.

1 comment:

Mr. Lee said...

9 / 12

You have tried to cover all the required points but your analysis is somewhat repetitve; the overuse of collapse. poor and house. Perhaps you might want to consult the thesaurus for a more varied vocabulary.