Saturday, June 14, 2008


This picture depicts a group of male youngsters enjoying a conversation. the venue seems to be a small meeting room and they have a small group of people having a short discussion seesion but unfortunately, they are endulging in their own joke instead. There is also a small snack-bar with a thermo-flask, a basket and several cups of mineral water on it. there are also signs of people being absent from the conference because in the foreground, there is a set of notes beside the guy in black that seems to be flip through non-thoroughly. A bag ialso resting on the chair implying that the person sitting there is gone for a while or maybe just not there, therefore, allowing the guy in black to have his bag on tha chair.
The bald guy dressed in white seems to be the one cracking the joke during a discussion session and the 2 other guys seem to enjoy it a lot. i think it would be better for them to focus on their work instead, otherwise, they might get scolded by their instructor.anything not related to the work, should be taed about only after the session, its the basic respect to the instructor in charge of the whole session and not to waste anybody's time.
the boys seem to have a good time together, though, and i believe they will still be in touch after the session.

1 comment:

Mr. Lee said...

8 / 12

Some noticeable careless errors (endulging, ialso, taed ) and inconsistent capitalization. Also, focus on the emotions of the "guys"; support your claims with more substantiation and be aware of the need for more formality.